If unintentional, turn them backward, use a bolt that is wide at the top, or add another lightning angle. Any use of that single-turn, tapered on both sides, lightning bolt facing right post-1930s is either morally despicable or historically oblivious.
Edvardo85
I’ll second removing the crown. I immediately interpreted this as LA Kings and this organization isn’t active in the ducks market. It’s not going to be recognized.
Other thoughts are the kerning on ANAHEIM isn’t my favorite. The hashtag also looks a bit lost where it crosses the logo, though « #F Together » has a certain appeal to it.
Dr_Hilarious
I would lose the bolts on the logo. I would also ditch the NHL street logo, it doesn’t add anything. The #flytogether is hard to read when it overlaps with the stick. I’d either move it further left or make it smaller and drop it lower so it doesn’t interact with the logo. Also for the logo on the back, usually back designs are large or small, not medium sized like you have here. Since the design is mainly on the front of the shirt, I would make this design on the back much smaller and move it up closer to the neck so that it’s more of an accent. I would also ditch the NHL logo below the ducks, it’s not necessary.
rupert_turtleman
I would definitely remove the crown w/sticks and the bolts. The asymmetry of it all makes it look unique already, it doesn’t need the bolts and crown. The entire graphic on the back, that could be its own shirt. Maybe move the hashtag horizontally to the back of the shirt towards the very top or towards the very bottom.
Having said all that, I really like the “x” player markers making a Flying V with the logo, and the vertical “mighty ducks Anaheim” compliments it very well.
Interesting-Gap7359
Love the idea but feels a little too noisy/too many different designs within one. I would lose the crown and bolts for sure, and one of the texts from the sides (either). The logo is also center justified so the tilt is throwing me off, I wonder how it would look if it were level?
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Why the SS logos around the Ducks logo?
If unintentional, turn them backward, use a bolt that is wide at the top, or add another lightning angle. Any use of that single-turn, tapered on both sides, lightning bolt facing right post-1930s is either morally despicable or historically oblivious.
I’ll second removing the crown. I immediately interpreted this as LA Kings and this organization isn’t active in the ducks market. It’s not going to be recognized.
Other thoughts are the kerning on ANAHEIM isn’t my favorite. The hashtag also looks a bit lost where it crosses the logo, though « #F Together » has a certain appeal to it.
I would lose the bolts on the logo. I would also ditch the NHL street logo, it doesn’t add anything. The #flytogether is hard to read when it overlaps with the stick. I’d either move it further left or make it smaller and drop it lower so it doesn’t interact with the logo. Also for the logo on the back, usually back designs are large or small, not medium sized like you have here. Since the design is mainly on the front of the shirt, I would make this design on the back much smaller and move it up closer to the neck so that it’s more of an accent. I would also ditch the NHL logo below the ducks, it’s not necessary.
I would definitely remove the crown w/sticks and the bolts. The asymmetry of it all makes it look unique already, it doesn’t need the bolts and crown. The entire graphic on the back, that could be its own shirt. Maybe move the hashtag horizontally to the back of the shirt towards the very top or towards the very bottom.
Having said all that, I really like the “x” player markers making a Flying V with the logo, and the vertical “mighty ducks Anaheim” compliments it very well.
Love the idea but feels a little too noisy/too many different designs within one. I would lose the crown and bolts for sure, and one of the texts from the sides (either). The logo is also center justified so the tilt is throwing me off, I wonder how it would look if it were level?
https://preview.redd.it/0lwsgky4vjbd1.png?width=2480&format=png&auto=webp&s=4fa52cfcfde86dfbe46317d961e544342337bd02
Better!