D’autres modifications et changements de couleur à mon faux logo des Canucks. Lequel aimes-tu?

5 Comments

1. helixflush 2 ans ago

   the first coloured one

2. Blablabigfoot 2 ans ago

   Oh ya, the first light blue one is amazing

3. ProphetofElias 2 ans ago

   This is actually really dang good. Not sure why this wasn’t thought of before

4. HothHanSolo 2 ans ago

   These are really fun, OP. If you’re looking for feedback, let me offer the laziest but most common feedback I give to designers and illustrators: do less.

   I think you could cut the little motion lines–they’re just muddying up the figure of Johnny Canuck (is that his name?). Likewise, you could cut the leg bits from below the text. They do make logical sense, but they’re just busying up the image.

   I might try a version without the green strip below the text, too.

   Lastly, I’d try tilting Mr. Canuck’s head forward a little bit, so he’s looking straight-ahead into the future instead of upward. I’m not sure that’d be better, but I’d try it.

   Please disregard my feedback if you’re disinclined. I’m just a guy on the Internet.

   In any case, this is strong work!

   EDIT: I don’t have a solution to this, but I also wonder about Mr. Canuck’s neck. It’s right at the centre of the image and our eye is drawn to it because it’s contrasting to the colours around it. Maybe try closing his collar a little bit?

5. DrGrommit 2 ans ago

   looking good. First one for sure. Maybe for the word Canucks go with an indian yellow and then maybe a nice dark red for the shadow? and make the circle outline black. Dunno just a thought. Looks awesome though. I really do miss those 93-94 Jerseys though.